Really good poem.

Withholders of my secrets
In control of blocking askance views
Never revealing the private moments
Down under the cloak of
Obscurity, hidden from 
Watchful gazes of judgmental observers.
Sanctuary of Shadows
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Nakia Allen
Deirdre ("Writer in the Abyss" )
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Apr 30, 2024
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Really good poem. I like how you use the first letter of "Window" to describe the withdrawing, control, hidden nature of window blinds. Photo is great too! 🙂
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Written by Deirdre ("Writer in the Abyss" )915 Followers
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BSc (Hons) Psychology(UK) and IT Graduate (IRE). Substack - https://deirdre2.substack.com https://ko-fi.com/deirdrewriterintheabyss https://github.com/Deirdre18
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