Very insightful article. I understand what you mean about the SEO headline analyser strategy. I have had this issue too, aiming for very high scores and using uncommon, power and emotion words and I can tell you some of my titles are downright weird. I have seen the same with others using it. The titles may score high but they look a bit weird. I think the title for the story you wrote in the screenshot looks sensible and not too weird, but I know what you mean about the SEO analyser. The titles just end up looking weird sometimes. I don't regularly write stories about my medium status but I did write one thanking those who support me on Medium.